This is a guest post from Aud Neal.
Show, don’t tell. It’s the mantra of the writing world and the most common bit of advice you’ll hear when it comes to tips for improving your writing. But what does this phrase actually mean?
It’s simple, really. Rather than coming right out and telling your readers the information you want them to learn about your characters (or, in the case of digital scrapbooking, your friends and family), you show them what these people are like, through their thoughts, actions, looks, relationships, and more. In short, everything that a person thinks, says, and does becomes a way for you to reveal and record more information about him or her.
How can you put this advice to work on your scrapbook pages? With three simple techniques:
1. Use dialogue. Don’t tell me that your kids are funny; write down the specific things they say and do. The more instances of real conversation that you can include in your pages, the better; these go a long way toward really capturing a moment and keeping it from being lost forever. Don’t just rely on your memory to capture the cute mispronunciations or serious questions of your little ones, either; make sure you keep a small notebook handy. This will make a great start to a writer’s notebook.
2. Use your five senses. Don’t tell me that it was a beautiful spring day â€“ show me! What color were the leaves? How did the flowers smell? What did the breeze feel like? Use smells, sounds, textures, and tastes in addition to what you see; allow your reader to completely experience the moment with you. You’ll often find that as you begin to include these kinds of details in your journaling, you have more to say, and more details will come to you during the writing process.
3. Be specific. Or, I should say be selectively specific. Include details, but don’t go overboard. Focus on using the most relevant details to help create mood or tone; think about how you want your readers to react to what you are writing, and then choose details to help create that reaction.
Great kit and template. I may have to try this 🙂 thanks 🙂
Wow, alot to digest… I may try but journaling is not my strong poing 🙁
The mini kit is fantastic, Thanks 🙂
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thanks for the great add-on and journaling lesson. I am going to do this b/c I would love to take that class.
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thank you , love your tips!
Love the freebie but YouSendIt is saying that your download has reached capacity and that you need to send again. Can you do that? Thanks!
thank you so much for this adorable kit! I made a layout and posted it here
Thanks for sharing!
Great journaling tips! Thanks for the fun kit and template. I flipped the template for mine… you can see it here:
I hope I win – what a awesome prize!
Love your journaling tips, Aud! and would love the chance to win your class!
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Love these tips! I am in desperate need of fixing how I write on my layouts. As you can see by my attempt at following your instructions on my layout – http://www.digishoptalk.com/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=617448
Thanks for the tips and the freebie kit and template! I had a lot of fun with this challenge. Here is my entry:
Yay! I got it done by midnight! I am sooo excited! Thanks so much for the challenge. Here is my LO:
Superb template! Thank you!